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Class writers of the week

Examples of brilliant creative writing by the children will be shown on this page as much as possible!! Look out for more soon.


February 2008   

'Ship in a bottle' by Elliot 

 

'I wish I was' by Finlay   'I wish I was' by Fiona   


March 2008

'The Crucifixion' by Charlie  

'About his person' poems inspired from an idea by Simon Armitage     

     Laura              Natasha            Sid

     Elliot               Naemi

     Adam              Fiona                                                                   

 

 


 

Since March 2008 !!

More poetry inspired by the poet Simon Armitage.

By Naemi

Ten Pence Story

The first thing I recall

I was a present, very small

The second thing I saw, a disappointed face

I hid inside tucked away.

 

A sweaty pocket was the next thing

I saw a piece of bubblegum, strangling him

I helped him out, did everything I could

I nearly died, I knew I would.

 

I was tossed and tossed

Always landed on heads

My own ambition, I decided to fall

I wanted to do it, to land on tail.

 

Soon I was out, left in the cold

Picked up, but dropped again unwanted

That was my lowest ebb

To be left alone, just like a web.

 

My seventh day, out in this world

All my youngest ones, the ones with curls

Taken away, gone from me

And I feel lonely like a small beetle.

 

And then I got caught in a child's eye

I was taken everywhere, even flying a kite

The piggy bank was my bed

Sometimes a locket with a curl of hair - red.

 


 

 By Georgia

 

Fifty Pence Story

I was so young, I was just made

Next thing I knew other were loose change

I was slotted inot a person's pocket

I was still too young for a MacDonald's nugget.

 

My saddest moment, well that's easy

In a dark box where everyone's sleepy

That dark box made me very sad

Probably because the lighting was bad.

 

It was annoying my sides were jagged

Which made vending quite a challenge

My owner went out to the arcade shop

He went out there until he dropped.

 

 


 

By Natasha

 

 

20p Story

My first day out in the world

In a street man's pocket, white as a pearl

New and scary it is out here

But it is the beginning of the new year.

 

Now I find myself in a tin

A charity box, yellow and thin

It is filled with things just like me

Up to the top, so you cannot see.

 

Until I was dropped, my life was cool

But now I am stuck in a swimming pool

Why did this happen you may ask

I was thrown in. That was last.

 


 

By Charlie 

Obverse of Ten Pence

Ten Pence Story

At first I was extremely hot

Taken out the melting pot

Next news I was in a French man's wallet

I was amazed by his golden locket.

 

It shone and dazzled in my eyes

The riches of this someone's life

Until I was dropped down a pipe

When my fear took over like a light.

 

My chocolate-brown started to fade

As I sat there for days and days

My heart lept as I saw

A hand reach down to the floor.

 


 

By Laura 

The Five pence coin

Five pence story

Out of the frying pan, into the fire

Into a box going higher and higher

Soon the safe's open, now I am out

There is no time to hang about.

 

But, finally, my grip let go

What would happen, I didn't know

A long the tarmac, under car tyres

Under the bells of a market boy crier.

 

The Five pence coin

The sharp eyes of a magpie mother

Scooped me up to take to another

For five weeks solid I sat with my kind

Some ten pence pieces, a silver brooch, blind.

 


 

By Lily

The Ten pence coin

Ten pence story

Free from the furnace, out to the light

Stuffed in a pocket of tobacco and pipe

Flicking me high for a horse race bet

Crashing to the ground, landing on my head.

 

Next I slipped down a gutter hole

Into a pool as black as coal

Mould forms on my surface, green

'Til a man clears it out, angry and lean.

 


 

 

'I wonder where the teachers sleep' by Elliot

I wonder where the teachers sleep

I wonder where they go

I wonder where the head was born

A million years ago.

 

I wonder if they have a dad

And a mother too

Do they go to the fun fair?

Or do they go to the zoo?

 

Do they climb trees like us?

Do they have any fun?

And where do they go

When the day is done?

 

Are they really aliens?

Do they come from space?

Are they really super spies

Who cannot tie their lace?

 

Maybe teachers aren't so bad

Maybe they are stars

But look at all the teachers, no

I don't think they are!

 




 
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